You didn't turn around, but I saw your shoulders tense. "Hard to sleep when you’re wired to a machine that tells you how to breathe."
Finally, you turned. Your eyes were tired, searching mine for an answer I wasn't sure I had. "So what’s the diagnosis, Doc? Is it broken or just confused?"
(e.g., a forbidden romance, a dark secret) I can then expand the text into a full chapter or scene.
(e.g., a futuristic hospital, a small-town clinic)
You didn't turn around, but I saw your shoulders tense. "Hard to sleep when you’re wired to a machine that tells you how to breathe."
Finally, you turned. Your eyes were tired, searching mine for an answer I wasn't sure I had. "So what’s the diagnosis, Doc? Is it broken or just confused?"
(e.g., a forbidden romance, a dark secret) I can then expand the text into a full chapter or scene.
(e.g., a futuristic hospital, a small-town clinic)