Timestamps: Unconditional Love [NEW]

Unconditional love is best proven when it’s tested. Does your draft show a moment where love should have failed but didn't?

Since I don't have the text of your draft yet, I can't give you a specific critique. However, the title suggests a structured, chronological exploration of a relationship or a life. Timestamps: Unconditional Love

Are the timestamps just dates, or do they signify emotional turning points? Unconditional love is best proven when it’s tested

Does the formatting stay the same throughout (e.g., October 2012 vs. 10/12/12 )? 10/12/12 )

The space between timestamps often tells a story. If there is a five-year jump, does the reader feel the weight of that missing time? 2. Showing "Unconditional"

Does the final timestamp provide a sense of "forever," or does it leave the reader with a poignant question?

Anne R. Allen writes funny mysteries and how-to-books for writers. She also writes poetry and short stories on occasion. She’s a contributor to Writer’s Digest and the Novel and Short Story Writer’s Market.

Her bestselling Camilla Randall Mystery Series features perennially down-on-her-luck former socialite Camilla Randall—who is a magnet for murder, mayhem and Mr. Wrong, but always solves the mystery in her quirky, but oh-so-polite way.

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Her emotional, entertaining women’s fiction and critically praised novels have sold millions of copies in hard cover, paperback and ebook editions, been translated into 19 languages, sold in 30 countries, and were prominent selections of leading book clubs including the Literary Guild and the Book Of The Month Club.

Timestamps: Unconditional Love [NEW]

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